Do It Yourself Gardening and Landscape Design

What would you change in this advertisement for landscaping service?

I have the entries listed as such underneath the logo:

* Lawn Maintenence * Aeration, Seeding
* Mulch, Topsoil * Irrigation
* Plant Installation * Ponds, Aquatics
* Bed Preparation * Patios, Walks
* Plant/Tree Service * Seasonal Flowers

Do any of these entries seem like they could be changed or re worded or even deleted to make it better?
Would you change any of the entries ?

or add anything?
THIS IS GOING ON A FLYER ADVERTISEMENT THE SIZE OF THE FLYER WILL BE HALF OF A 8 "1/2 X 11 " PAPER

I am British so I would put
Lawn maintenance and leave out ‘aeration seeding’
as that is in lawn maintenance
I would change ‘walks’ to paths.
apart from those minor items it is fine

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